This animation was AMAZINGLY beautiful.
Great story: Very touching for a flash short - (9/10)
Characters: Characters development is great. Impressive voice acting too! - (9/10)
Music: Very dulcet - (8/10)
Detail: Wonderfully detailed, lighting is gorgeous - (9/10)
Animation: Just a wee bit rough, but then again I understand the difficulties behind using flash - (7/10)
I am madly in love with this short.
Excellent production values; wonderful cinema-like quality.
Somewhat intriguing story.
Character development is crucial however. The main character seems just a bit bland and cliché to me: the archetype of a deeply disturbed heroine plagued by her past (blah blah blah)... Then again this was just a pilot and we haven't gotten much time to learn about her.
Other than that, great job man. Truly one of THE best animations I have ever seen on Newgrounds.
Pretty Nice Animations!
However, I must tell you what I really feel about this project. Please don't let my criticism bring you down but rather build you up.
Very smooth animation. Definitely digging the frame rate.
Good choice of music for this project; very well synchronized.
Haven't seen this sort of thing on Newgrounds.
Just because it's new on Newgrounds doesn't mean its creative or original.
A bit repetitive.
Could have been just a bit more detailed.
Other than that, you're a damn fine artist. Keep up the good work!
NOTE: Sorry if my ratings are a little low I just want to give "honest" reviews about everything and not just rate everything 10.
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